ASSIGNMENT #5
Error Analysis: Rewrite these sentences correctly.
- My wife made me to clean up the garden before our visitors started arrive last weekend.
- Before you ordered to Guy to pick up the mess you say he made, you should have warned not to make a mess in the room.
- Whenever the kids are home, I hear the fridge door to open and close.
- Betty got her brother climbing the tree rescuing the cat.
- Mr. and Mrs. Sullivan preferring to go to Rome for their holiday rather than to go to Hawaii.
- Swimming is easy learning when you are a child, but you can learn swim well as an adult if you have a good instructor.
- Ben enjoyed come here last week, and now he's looking forward to see Julie next week.
- I thought him incapable to doing that job, but I was pleasantly surprised when it worked out well that I hadn't prevented him in applying for it.
- When I opened the door, I smelled the dinner cook on the stove and heard my mother to talk to her friend on the phone.
- We had great difficulty to reach our home yesterday because of the heavy snowfall that caused us to waste a lot of time go nowhere in the traffic.
- When we went to dancing on Friday evening, we were disappointed when we saw some of our friends to go to a movie instead.
- While I definitely appreciate having given such good advice by my parents, I might have appreciated it more if they hadn't made it clear that they expected me telling them every time I made a mistake.
- While I prefer listening to classical music, I am happy listen to almost any music except heavy metal; I can't bear to listen to that. It makes me want covering my ears.
- Jack and Sylvia discussed about to not go to the party because they were very tired and needed to get some rest.
- Gary said it had been a good experience have been self-reliant as a young adult; he was learning a lot about himself in the process.
- Sally did to try very hard not making any mistakes when she had to read aloud to the class.
- My grandfather was determined be independent as he got older as he was too proud admitting that he might need some help.
- The kids promised not telling the secret to anyone else or to keeping secrets from each other.
- The English teacher always complained about they're essay writing ability. He told those two particular girls pay attention to the instructions he gave the class.
- We finished to study yesterday instead of going to skiing; skiing would have been much more fun but not as important for our future.
Paragraph Writing: From Ex. 26 (SB: pg. 347), choose either "get a job", "rent an apartment", "change a flat tire", "play a musical instrument" or "play a game". Write one paragraph, not a composition. Do not follow the example given in the text that uses an introductory paragraph.
Marking Scheme
Target grammar—Use at least 8 different gerund and/or infinitive
constructions* 50%
Content 10%
Organization 10%
Mechanics 10%
Grammar (other than target grammar) 10%
Style 10%
*Identify all the gerunds and infinitives in your paragraph.